HW- make a stroy

The travel life of a letter [use possive tense]

Once upon a time, a piece of paper was born in the UK. It was made of color in the paper factory. The paper wanted to travel the world, waiting in the sationary in theUK. One day, the piece of paper was bought by little Johney. He is a primary student. He wanted to send a letter to his friend, Audy, in Colombia. The letter was written by little Johney, and he put the letter in an envelope.

Little Johney wrote his friend's address, and put the stamp on the envelope. The envelope was taken to a postbox and the envelope was later collected from the postbox. Then it was classified in the post office. A few days later the letter was delivered by a postman, then it was recieved by Audy.

When Audy recived the letter, the envelope was opened. Audy read the letter, then he replied to the letter from Johney. The letter was recycled in the Colombian factory. Finally, the recycled paper was made into new paper. Then it was waiting in the Colombian sationary shop, and it waited another chance to travel. That's the paper's life story.

Teacher David
Good, but...
1)Names= no artice (a / an/ the)
2)Paper + message = letter Not paper
3)Revise punctuation/ linkers (then / next / later)

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