Homework 7th July 2009 Teacher: David
by Li-wen(Nina), Wang
Using appropriate past and present tenses, write about the last live music event or festival you have seen or visited. [125-175words]
In fact, I haven’t been to see music festival. In my opinion, music festivals always have too many people dancing together, especially the young and crazy people. The place is often set up on the beach, big city squares. I haven’t seen a music festival. I don’t like music too loud and crowded people dancing together, sometimes they also dance crazy. I don’t want to take my children there, because it is dangerous. I have heard about music festivals, some bad news, such us young people drinking too much, some people took lots of drugs to enjoy dancing, and many people made a lot of rubbish in there . Nowadays, young people are always thinking about how to enjoy life at that time. They uausally forget that they make a lot of bad news during the music festival.
Teacher said:
Good Attempt Nina. Please revise the present perfect tense.
Past action--started in the past continuing until the present.
Past action with no specific time reference.
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