The travel life of a letter [use possive tense]
Once upon a time, a piece of paper was born in the UK. It was made of color in the paper factory. The paper wanted to travel the world, waiting in the sationary in theUK. One day, the piece of paper was bought by little Johney. He is a primary student. He wanted to send a letter to his friend, Audy, in Colombia. The letter was written by little Johney, and he put the letter in an envelope.
Little Johney wrote his friend's address, and put the stamp on the envelope. The envelope was taken to a postbox and the envelope was later collected from the postbox. Then it was classified in the post office. A few days later the letter was delivered by a postman, then it was recieved by Audy.
When Audy recived the letter, the envelope was opened. Audy read the letter, then he replied to the letter from Johney. The letter was recycled in the Colombian factory. Finally, the recycled paper was made into new paper. Then it was waiting in the Colombian sationary shop, and it waited another chance to travel. That's the paper's life story.
Teacher David
Good, but...
1)Names= no artice (a / an/ the)
2)Paper + message = letter Not paper
3)Revise punctuation/ linkers (then / next / later)
6.3
Thursday, 16 July 2009
Saturday, 11 July 2009
Homework 7th July 2009
Homework 7th July 2009 Teacher: David
by Li-wen(Nina), Wang
Using appropriate past and present tenses, write about the last live music event or festival you have seen or visited. [125-175words]
In fact, I haven’t been to see music festival. In my opinion, music festivals always have too many people dancing together, especially the young and crazy people. The place is often set up on the beach, big city squares. I haven’t seen a music festival. I don’t like music too loud and crowded people dancing together, sometimes they also dance crazy. I don’t want to take my children there, because it is dangerous. I have heard about music festivals, some bad news, such us young people drinking too much, some people took lots of drugs to enjoy dancing, and many people made a lot of rubbish in there . Nowadays, young people are always thinking about how to enjoy life at that time. They uausally forget that they make a lot of bad news during the music festival.
Teacher said:
Good Attempt Nina. Please revise the present perfect tense.
Past action--started in the past continuing until the present.
Past action with no specific time reference.
6.3
by Li-wen(Nina), Wang
Using appropriate past and present tenses, write about the last live music event or festival you have seen or visited. [125-175words]
In fact, I haven’t been to see music festival. In my opinion, music festivals always have too many people dancing together, especially the young and crazy people. The place is often set up on the beach, big city squares. I haven’t seen a music festival. I don’t like music too loud and crowded people dancing together, sometimes they also dance crazy. I don’t want to take my children there, because it is dangerous. I have heard about music festivals, some bad news, such us young people drinking too much, some people took lots of drugs to enjoy dancing, and many people made a lot of rubbish in there . Nowadays, young people are always thinking about how to enjoy life at that time. They uausally forget that they make a lot of bad news during the music festival.
Teacher said:
Good Attempt Nina. Please revise the present perfect tense.
Past action--started in the past continuing until the present.
Past action with no specific time reference.
6.3
Wednesday, 24 June 2009
To Teacher Heather's letter--Teacher training [II]
Dear Heather
Thank you for your teach. Nice to meet you in the UK. It is my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce myself to you. My name is Li-Wen(Nina) Wang, who was born in Taiwan. My family consists of four members, my husband, one son, one daugther, and me. My husband is a manager at the high school. My job is a counselling teacher in Taiwan. Our two children are pupils. My husband and I are both high school teachers. So we spend more time with our children and have a better work-life balance. If we have a long holiday, we usually plan some trips. And we teached my children to know these places before we deparded. We took many photos and shoot many films for our memory. I used computer skills to link our film editing our traveling film after our trip. I really enjoy my family life, and with my two children. I love to teach them in our life. I am enjoy my work and life.I have a harmonious and lovely family.
Yours sincerely,
Li-wen(Nina), Wang
PS> South Korea is near to Taiwan. Welcome to Taiwan. ^_* 24th June 2009
Thank you for your teach. Nice to meet you in the UK. It is my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce myself to you. My name is Li-Wen(Nina) Wang, who was born in Taiwan. My family consists of four members, my husband, one son, one daugther, and me. My husband is a manager at the high school. My job is a counselling teacher in Taiwan. Our two children are pupils. My husband and I are both high school teachers. So we spend more time with our children and have a better work-life balance. If we have a long holiday, we usually plan some trips. And we teached my children to know these places before we deparded. We took many photos and shoot many films for our memory. I used computer skills to link our film editing our traveling film after our trip. I really enjoy my family life, and with my two children. I love to teach them in our life. I am enjoy my work and life.I have a harmonious and lovely family.
I had finished master degree, Diploma in Graduate School of Child Welfare, Chinese Culture University ten years ago. So I became a counselling teacher for ten years. I have pursued further education at Institute of Teacher Education from National University each summer vacation. I have finished Instructional Guidance Credit Courses, Guidance Credit Program Courses, Teaching Chinese as a Second Language Teachers’ Program, Education Credit Courses, Specail Education Credit Courses. Last year, my husband had a chance to study master of Nottingham University. So I had a chance to take one year holiday with my husband. Moreover, I have studied English language with my family for one year in the UK. This year I have improved my English and broaden my horizons. I met new people and known different culture in the world. I took many photos and wrote many essaies about my English life. I felt more important of family life education in the UK, beacause my two children have studyed here. I have enjoyed to join my children activities at primary school in the UK. Next month, we will go back to Taiwan and carry on our job.
There are many wonderful and unforgetful experiences in my English life.
Yours sincerely,
Li-wen(Nina), Wang
PS> South Korea is near to Taiwan. Welcome to Taiwan. ^_* 24th June 2009
Teacher Heather's letter--Teacher training
Dear Nina
How are you? I am very tired at the moment, as I have just finished my university degree and started to train as a teacher staight after. I got my exam results today and I am very happy, sitting in my back garden with a glass of wine, as my results were good!
I am originally from the noth west of England, and have been living in Coventry in the west Midlands, as this is where I did my degree. I will be moving to South Korea in August to teach English in a boy's Middle school for 3-4 years, which I am very excited about!
I look forward to reading your responding letter.
Yours Sincerely
Heather
How are you? I am very tired at the moment, as I have just finished my university degree and started to train as a teacher staight after. I got my exam results today and I am very happy, sitting in my back garden with a glass of wine, as my results were good!
I am originally from the noth west of England, and have been living in Coventry in the west Midlands, as this is where I did my degree. I will be moving to South Korea in August to teach English in a boy's Middle school for 3-4 years, which I am very excited about!
I look forward to reading your responding letter.
Yours Sincerely
Heather
HW- What's your impression of ILS
ILS language school is my first English school in the UK. When I arrived the first day. I saw many different students from different countries. It was incredible. I couldn't say any long stentences. I was also nervous and worrid about speaking. I think speaking is very important for me.
In my opinion, there are many good teachers here. However I don't like changing too many teaches during a class. My first leve pre-intermediate, but I met five teachers in three months. That's not good for students. I needed to know different teachers have different teaching skills and teachers sometimes didn't know the student's situation.
I have been studying in ILS for eight months. I saw there are many changes in ILS. Now the school has touch screen computers, and teachers use computer to teach us. I got a new English blogger, which records my all homework, and photos of my English study. That's great.
In my opinion, there are many good teachers here. However I don't like changing too many teaches during a class. My first leve pre-intermediate, but I met five teachers in three months. That's not good for students. I needed to know different teachers have different teaching skills and teachers sometimes didn't know the student's situation.
I have been studying in ILS for eight months. I saw there are many changes in ILS. Now the school has touch screen computers, and teachers use computer to teach us. I got a new English blogger, which records my all homework, and photos of my English study. That's great.
Saturday, 13 June 2009
Thanks for Teacher Petra
Dear Petra:
Thank you for your teach. I really like you. When I heared about you had another plan, I was upset. But I still bless you have good fortune. I'm so lucky because I meet you, you are a very good teacher. I learned a lot teach skills from you. You are ambitious, cautious, creative, organised, hard-working, paient for students, great teach skills, push students improving, and use new computer skills. I love it, and I enjoy your teach. Now I'm improving my English, I'm so happy. This term I focused to improve my speaking, beacause I always worried about my speaking. When I prepared my presentation, I praticed to speak many times. I found I can do it, and my kids always told me " mom, well done." That's lovely.
English was my worst subject, when I was young. But now I can speak some English, and I can use English language to present my presentation. That's amazing. After 5 weeks, I'll finish my English class at ILS school. I think when I will go back to Taiwan, I'll still watching English TV show, listening English radio, and speaking English with my kids. And I'll change many my teach skills in my class. If I have a long vacation, I'll go travlling another country with my family. That's my dream.
Finally I want to talk you, you are my best English teacher. And I also can't belive I own a English blogger, I'll still writing English in the future. That way can record my some ideas. I'm going to go back to Taiwan on Auguset. If you have long vacation, welcome to Taiwan. You can live my house in Taipei. I almost check my E-mail every day. So if you come to Taiwan, you can give me some messages. I'll take back some messages for you.
Your Taiwanese friend, Nina Wang's E-mail: ninawangblog@gmail.com
Keep in touch. ^_* Many Thanks.
Thank you for your teach. I really like you. When I heared about you had another plan, I was upset. But I still bless you have good fortune. I'm so lucky because I meet you, you are a very good teacher. I learned a lot teach skills from you. You are ambitious, cautious, creative, organised, hard-working, paient for students, great teach skills, push students improving, and use new computer skills. I love it, and I enjoy your teach. Now I'm improving my English, I'm so happy. This term I focused to improve my speaking, beacause I always worried about my speaking. When I prepared my presentation, I praticed to speak many times. I found I can do it, and my kids always told me " mom, well done." That's lovely.
English was my worst subject, when I was young. But now I can speak some English, and I can use English language to present my presentation. That's amazing. After 5 weeks, I'll finish my English class at ILS school. I think when I will go back to Taiwan, I'll still watching English TV show, listening English radio, and speaking English with my kids. And I'll change many my teach skills in my class. If I have a long vacation, I'll go travlling another country with my family. That's my dream.
Finally I want to talk you, you are my best English teacher. And I also can't belive I own a English blogger, I'll still writing English in the future. That way can record my some ideas. I'm going to go back to Taiwan on Auguset. If you have long vacation, welcome to Taiwan. You can live my house in Taipei. I almost check my E-mail every day. So if you come to Taiwan, you can give me some messages. I'll take back some messages for you.
Your Taiwanese friend, Nina Wang's E-mail: ninawangblog@gmail.com
Keep in touch. ^_* Many Thanks.
Friday, 12 June 2009
My presentation- Beautiful Island Taiwan
Please link my facebook album, you can see all my sildes.Welcome to Taiwan. ^_*
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