Dear Anna
Sorry for not writing earlier but I've been incredibly busy. I'm writing the letter after my family and had been to Cardiff and Bath. I'm writing to thank you for your photos, there are lovely. I'm going to go back to Taiwan in August. I really enjoy English life everything. I have been to Scotland, Wales, and England. I'll have taken 10 thousand photos when I go back to Taiwan.
For the last two month, I've been busy organising everything for me. I'll clean my ret house, and send something to Taiwan, then I'll leave. Anyway, I have good memories of the UK. Thanks again for our meeting. Don't forget my invition to come to Taiwan, my family would love to meet you.
Best Wishes
Nina
This letter is ture, I'll send a card for my English friend.
It's good for me.
Today, my exam wasn't good in the class, I know I need pratice more.
Many Thanks, Teacher Petra. You are so nice. ^_*
update: 2 June 2009
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HI Nina,
ReplyDeletethis is a very well written text (the first half of the letter in particular is very strong in terms of the use of tenses).
There are minor mistakes in the other part:
I've been busy organising.
NOT:I've been busy organizing everything for me
memories of the UK
NOT: memories in the UK